This is my first draft of textual analysis, personally i am not as happy as can be with this draft but overall i think it was a good effort.
What i believe i did well was the way i structured the piece it allowed for easy comparisons, between the five intros.
Although what i believe i could have improved upon was the depth of the comaprisons and the ideas involved, in this draft i believe i only scraped the surface, i could have gone in to so much more depth and detail on each of the seperate elements.
Overall, it was a good attempt, but i could have done better.
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This is my first draft of textual analysis, personally i am not as happy as can be with this draft but overall i think it was a good effort.
What i believe i did well was the way i structured the piece it allowed for easy comparisons, between the five intros.
Although what i believe i could have improved upon was the depth of the comaprisons and the ideas involved, in this draft i believe i only scraped the surface, i could have gone in to so much more depth and detail on each of the seperate elements.
Overall, it was a good attempt, but i could have done better.
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